Featured author this week is Patricia A. McGoldrick of Kitchener, Ontario...
An acrostic story.
Best in the
Bruce!
Any child knows, as Annie did, that summer is the
best! “Best in the Bruce” was a phrase that Annie used each year to chronicle
her photos and memories of summer holidays. Chantry Island and long summer
picnics with Gran and Grandpa were highlights of the July-August memories in
Annie’s mind.
Determined to make this year special, the most
memorable of all summers, Annie packed carefully. Everything she needed was soon
tucked into the old green carpetbag suitcase that had been given to her by Gran
when she was eight years old. “Family heirloom, it was, to be sure,” her Gran
had said. Gran’s assurances, years ago, had guaranteed to little blonde-haired
Annie that the velvety case was hers to treasure, just like that magical case in
the Mary Poppins movie!
Helping herself to a boxful of Mom’s homemade
granola trail mix for the long drive to the cottage, Annie heaved a sign of
relief as she closed the trunk lid. Intently, after putting on her sun glasses,
she made a quick check of her cash supply, fuel gauge and, yes, a renewable
bottle of water.
Just as she turned the key in the ignition,
backed out the driveway and began her journey north, Annie was overwhelmed by a
wave of nostalgia. Kate, her eighty-five year old grandmother, would not be able
to make the trip to Chantry Island this summer. Leukemia, no longer in
remission, had weakened Gran severely. Many days had been spent in the hospital.
Nursing care, round the clock, now, was necessary to ease her pain.
Only the landmarks of Annie’s much beloved Bruce
Peninsula stood firm, it seemed, as she was driving, while, sadly, Gran was
losing the vitality that had been so characteristic of her being.
Past peninsula summers had taken Annie in
directions she never would have imagined. Quests for long lost treasures had
filled many hours for Annie as she explored the depths of Emmet Lake caves.
Rambling over the green countryside in the back
of Grandpa’s red pick-up truck had instilled a spirit of adventure in Annie and
her cousins. Sleek petals of precious rare orchids on Flower Pot Island and
orange-red sunsets had been captured in family photos.
Treasures of each summer were hauled home by
Annie in the carpet bag. Under a glass casing in the family room, the craggy
rocks and smooth bits of driftwood later were nestled with care.
Video technology through the years had captured
some of the laughter and changing profiles of Gran and the cousins at their
annual picnic feasts on Chantry Island.
When Annie had children of her own, in days
ahead, she vowed to herself to carry on the traditions started by Gran. Xavier,
her closest cousin, hoped to do the same.
Yet, it would not be easy for Annie and her
cousins without Gran’s fierce urgency to make the most of each day on the
island.
Zest for living, as Annie knew, was Gran’s key
ingredient for a happy life, and, as she turned into the cottage driveway with a
wistful smile on her face, Annie was determined to ensure that her last summer
in the Bruce with Gran would be one of the best!
The end.
Author Patricia A. McGoldrick
2013 BIO CURRENT
Patricia A.
McGoldrick
is a Kitchener, Ontario Canada writer whose poetry and reviews have been
published in the Christian
Science Monitor, The
WM Review Connection, and ChapterandVerse.ca.
Poems published in anthologies, including: Animal
Companions, Animal Doctors, Animal People; Beyond
the Dark Room, an international collection of transformative poetry, with
proceeds from book sales being given to Doctors Without Borders/MSF; Poetic Bloomings--the first year.
Patricia is a member of The
Ontario Poetry Society and the League
of Canadian Poets.
W E B: Patricia-Anne-McGoldrick
BLOGS: PM_Poet Writer; PM27's blog TWITTER: @pamcgoldrick
This is such a joy to read, Patricia!! So nice to see you being featured with such a beautiful and timeless tale of passing on treasure to future generations. You made this challenge look effortless...reads so naturally. So wonderful! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Hannah! Appreciate these comments from such a talented storyteller/poet. :)
DeleteLovely slow, Patricia. You make me want to know this countryside, this place where living with nature is a given and time spent outdoors with it, learning its secrets is the best of all summer activities. I thoroughly enjoyed this story, my friend.
ReplyDeleteClaudsy, thanks so much for stopping by to read the story. You have summed up the character of what we discovered in those summer trips to the Bruce! :)
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